Edit of top

Here is a before and after of the top she was wearing before and how it looks after. I have painted over it with white paint to make it look like a plain white t-shirt. when you look at it close up you can see the edit change however when looking at it at A4 you can't see the change at all so it makes it look like she originally had a white t-shirt.  

Front cover after feedback

Here i have changed the puff so i it is more suitable to my target audience. Also from the feedback i have received was to add a barcode and also to change the text colouring so it was more readable I also included the month of what the magazine is.

Feedback On music Magazine Production

Here are my current Music Magazine Production, I have received feedback from my Teacher on what i need to improve in order to meet my the requirements for my target grade and how i can improve it to make it more look professional. 

Double Page Spread Moodbord

The main Conventions i can see from the double page spreads are... 

• All Of the double page spreads above have a larger image of the artist that the article is about, The images are normally a close up,mid shot or a full body shot. The reason why they might use these shots is because they are the mostly common used shots when taking pictures.

• The colours used on the double paged spreads are light colours as a background the reason i think they use light colours is so the image and title of the article stands out. The text is black in all of the images above but key information is in a brighter colour normally the colour used in the title.

• Many of the double paged spreads above are interviews or things about the artists, I know this as from looking at the images it shows quotes.  

Double Page spread Analysis

Double page spread from Fader Magazine

In this double spread they use one of the pages to promote the artist by making the whole photo be the artist. By doing this it appeals to the audience as they could use this page as a poster if they wanted to. By having the lead image a photo of the artist ‘Wiz Khalifa’ it shows the article is very much about them. the artist to make him look to the audience how he portrays himself in his music, for example Wiz Khalifa consistently in his music talks about getting high and smoking weed, therefore they have made Wiz Khalifa have smoke coming out of his mouth. This appeals to not only the target audience but the artists fan base as the images and article fits with the way Wiz Khalifa is portrayed. This too reinforces the that rappers smoke and take drugs. Wiz Khalifa reinforces the way a stereotypical rapper is seen,This appeals to the audience as the magazine shows the genre all the way through.
The magazine again uses colour code, by choosing the background of the lead image to be black and the artists hat to be yellow as well as the writing and heading fits in with the artist as Wiz Khalifa’s number 1 song is called Black & Yellow and it is what he is known for. Therefore this appeals to his fan base as it links his work in with the article and makes it more interesting and fun in some ways for the audience.The magazine keeps the title very simple, they use Wiz Khalifa’s trademark initials using the colour code of black and yellow again to indicate his song Black & Yellow and to promote Wiz Khalifa not only as an artist but as a brand also. The magazine uses a heading of ‘How High’ by using tells the audience a bit about the artist the article, this appeals to the reader as they learn if the article is going to be interesting to them without having to read the whole article. I think this double page spread type will attract my audience. 

Trialing different colours for my Front cover page from feedback

From My feedback i have received i  have been trialing with various colours, I am going to be changing my cover picture soon but i am planning on keeping the text the same as the feedback received. 

From image number one and two  i went top change the background colour to a darker grey i thought this as it would make the text stand out more, as it didn't not clash with any colours on the cover. 

Image three and four i used a brighter background as it would make the whole magazine stand out so it will grab the audiences attention as you don't see many brightly coloured music magazines. 

JAAM Contents Page

This is my current idea For my contents page the images are missing at the moment but the images will be in the space between the title and the contents table